My Poem -> Futile
I am told,
I am inutile
By you,
My love
What is there
That I should do,
To impress you
Cant you see?
Cant you see, my dear?
The weeping of the sky
The tears that flows
Down the mountain
All this effort,
Will it go futile
Without your acknowledgement
Would it disappoint me
I try to be endeavouring
I try to be close
I try and try and try
Once again,
It goes unnoticed
You, reverting back to me,
“What’s wrong with you?”
My heart bleeds to see
My attempts disregarded
Is there that much of pain,
That I spill upon you
That none of my undertakings
Spreads deviation to you
Now,
All I have become,
A silent soul
Not you, not anyone,
Do I express to …
Not to blame anyone
But myself
For not understanding
The difference
Between the sky and the earth
Between smart and unintelligent
*END*
So, what do you all think? Well, I must admit that its a negative poem. Well, I was desperate to tell one poem and I just had this easy. Its sad as well. But dun think that I am sad though. haha … Dont judge me from this poem .. its just that I have lost my talent of writing a poem and I just wanted to come out with one … Anyways, please comment 
THanks